Deepest Thoughts, Darkest Emotions.

Go down

Deepest Thoughts, Darkest Emotions.

Post by GothicXHermit on Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:35 pm

Okay, this first post is just going to be in introduction to my poetry.

Most of the poems I write are gothic poems. I've a few encouraging ones.

My poems range from 4 lines to 8stanzas.

I write mostly in 4line stanzas, sometimes 2/3, seldom more.

I focus a lot on imagery I believe.

Because it has been quite some time since I started out (5 years ago), so my poetry ranges in terms of style.

Like for example, rhyming and non-rhyming poems and perspective of poem.

My most recent type of writing is mostly non-rhyming, focuses on depth and less on explanation.

Sorry it seems like a dreary to read all these words without reading a proper poem, but I'd greatly appreciate if you all could R&R.

Thank you for your attention,
~Ger.

GothicXHermit

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-07-09

Character sheet
Name: Honey-Chan
Age: 16

View user profile

Back to top Go down

With reference to 'One Child'

Post by GothicXHermit on Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:39 pm

I don't know if you all have read the book 'One Child', by Torey Haden. I wrote this poem in dedication to both the author and the child. I wrote from the perspective of the child... or what I so assume is the perspective of the child.


Forever

Entrusting an empty shell a soul,
you took my hand tenderly in yours.
Affection gently strumming through,
you slowly lead me away from fear.

Replacing torn sheets with fresh ones,
you tamed my violent nature with love.
Disregarding my arduous odor,
you embraced me warmly with each meet.

Awarding all my little achievements,
you encouraged me to be gentle and kind.
Believing in me for everything I do,
you opened my heart to the world once again.

You may be normal in eyes of the public,
but you are a guardian angel to me.
I'll live in regrets if I don't tell you,
"Thank you and I love you forever."
~Ger.

GothicXHermit

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-07-09

Character sheet
Name: Honey-Chan
Age: 16

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Journey

Post by GothicXHermit on Sat Jul 10, 2010 12:43 pm

Journey

Smile as much,
laugh as hard,
just desperately filling,
an empty heart.

Rant as much,
hit as hard,
just hysterically venting,
deeming it helps.

Hide as much,
lie as hard,
just frantically searching,
purpose of life.
~Ger.


GothicXHermit

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-07-09

Character sheet
Name: Honey-Chan
Age: 16

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Flames To Dust

Post by GothicXHermit on Sat Jul 10, 2010 12:46 pm

Flames To Dust

Affection that used to gently strum,
what's left is the pain that hums.
Fingers laced, heart interlocked,
we thought nothing could block.

When problems begun to arise,
oaths were broken, we told lies.
It simply didn't occur to us,
how a simple line could be our last.

Torn pieces of our draping hearts' core,
lying on a dusty, forgotten floor.
Even if we became friends again one day,
we knew the trust between has been frayed.
~Ger.

I was inspired by Nelly Furtado's 'All Good Things'.

GothicXHermit

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-07-09

Character sheet
Name: Honey-Chan
Age: 16

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Deepest Thoughts, Darkest Emotions.

Post by Fire Forever on Sun Jul 11, 2010 1:49 pm

Flames to Dust is my fav. I guess the reson being is because its so easy to relate to it because that was kinda like how my last relationship ended and made me feel. you're poems are amazing keep writting. Smile

_________________


Fire can be a friend and bring warmth or it can burn you. Smile

Please Join
http://houseofnight.forumotion.net/ and www.Nyxsentgoodness.forumotion.com.. they are awsome sites.
avatar
Fire Forever
Fire & Poet

Posts : 419
Join date : 2010-04-19
Age : 26
Location : Sitting in a tree with my lover playing with fire. :D

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Deepest Thoughts, Darkest Emotions.

Post by GothicXHermit on Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:19 am

Thanks for the review (: It is nice to know that my poems are appreciated by someone.

GothicXHermit

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-07-09

Character sheet
Name: Honey-Chan
Age: 16

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Deepest Thoughts, Darkest Emotions.

Post by GothicXHermit on Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:21 am

Empty Notepad

Constraint to happiness,
the words you could write.
Limited to appreciation,
the markings made on paper.

Where your world's just darkness,
you seek for pain to reside.
Ignoring the contradictions,
you had your emotions tempered.

'One is hurt enough, we don't need more',
the line you use to cover your sore.
Forgetting the pain you hold,
a new hope blooms as one gets old.

Neglecting the growing wound in you,
tearing a hole right through.
Constantly bringing light to the world.
sharing joy with others through words.

You're but an empty vessel,
that no amount of joy can fill.
You're but in need of an ear,
that can sit by and hear.

Your life's but an empty page,
where vocab depicts no emotions.
Your soul's but only worn,
hoping for the day to reborn.

It's time to tear away your masquerade,
for history's pain will only then fade.
It's a waste to spend life in regrets,
there's just so much to experience yet.

It's time to break open the locks,
and put your past away in a box.
It's when you put down the bane,
and clear the remains of old stains.
~Ger.

written for self-encouragement.

GothicXHermit

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-07-09

Character sheet
Name: Honey-Chan
Age: 16

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Deepest Thoughts, Darkest Emotions.

Post by GothicXHermit on Fri Oct 01, 2010 1:23 pm

Broken Doll

I see a casement,
a vault,
filled with nothingness.

I sense a mellow,
a tingling,
bitterness of sorrow.

I inflict a boundless,
a universe,
of pure anguish.

I make a shelter,
a home,
with no windows nor doors.

I am a being,
a soul,
living without life.
~Ger.

Sorry I've been gone for so long.. Looks like I'm forgotten anyway. /shrugs/ Used to it...

GothicXHermit

Posts : 27
Join date : 2010-07-09

Character sheet
Name: Honey-Chan
Age: 16

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Deepest Thoughts, Darkest Emotions.

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum